Title: Men and
Dreams in the Dhauladhar
Author: Kochery
C. Shibu
Publishers:
Niyogi Books
Genre: General
Fiction
Pages: 287
(Paperbound)
Source: Review
copy sent by the author
This is an
interesting book from a debut author. The narration and the characters developed
and the background for the story imagined is quite satisfying. As a first time
author, I would say that, the attempt is very nice. The mystery in the novel
remains intact till the end and the story is quite gripping. There are numerous
characters from the novel and each of the characters holds its importance to a particular
scene or the plotline in the novel. The plot of book seems quite unusual.
We have
protagonists from different parts of the cities. An engineer and a Kalari
(famous martial art form in Kerala) practitioner, Nanda, whose family was
constantly marred with the factions in his home town. His family had a long
unsettled feud with another local gang in Kerala, which resulted in several
deaths in his family including his father, his uncles, and finally his own
brother. He finally marries his deceased brother’s wife Nandinikutty. Events led to one another and Nanda finds
himself a part of this murderous rage and avenges his brother’s killers in a
mob fight. From then on, he is on a run and changes various places and cities
and finally settles as a site engineer in a Dam construction project in
Dhauladhar.
We also have
other two protagonists, Rekha a doctor cum dancer and Khusro a Kashmiri youth,
who was recruited by Pakistani terrorist group to conduct a terror operation
inside Kashmir. The background stories of these two protagonists was overdone
and there was no necessary to write so many pages describing life and pasts of
these two when they add no add value to the ongoing plotline.
Anyway,
fortunate events brings Rekha and Khusro close together and there will be a
kind of weird love story between them. I didn’t expected that a highly educated
girl, who travelled throughout the world, gave hundreds of dance performances
will fall for a guy who is a terrorist in the making. Sure, Love is blind after
all. Author made it possible in this fictitious work. The readers have to
accept that without a shred of doubt. Whereas Khusro, the aspiring mujahiddeen,
has a sense of morals left in him and he turns out to be sane when his fellow
terrorists (whom he helped in crossing the border into Kashmir) tries to rape
women and he couldn’t stand it and kills them. Thanks to the charm of Rekha.
The story is
quite heavy for a reader who has no background or even an iota of information
in the dam construction terminologies. It was overly done throughout the novel.
The story deviates at many places and you feel at times that you’re reading a
dam construction manual. Author could’ve avoided many technical details of the
dam construction and rather should’ve given importance on how would the
terrorists are plotting to blow up the dam.
The novel keeps
its interesting point in each and every chapter. Readers will be constantly
guessing what might happen next. That’s the best part of the novel. Nanda’s
role was made bare minimum. He should’ve made some contributions in the actual
story other than sitting with constant fear of police and not talking to anybody.
The climax part of the novel was made too quickly I suppose. There should’ve
been some action moments in the final few pages, as I personally felt, the
climax part was the only shortcoming in the book. Otherwise, the story is
interesting from beginning till the end.
The author keeps adding
numerous new characters in each and every chapter. That’s one more shortcomings
in the novel. I guess after second half, the author should’ve stopped adding
more characters and instead should’ve developed the story with more intense and
vigor. Overall, a new attempt and good narration.
My Rating:
4/5
(Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest
review.)